The Warriors Theory*Possible Spoilers*

[Wolfeth]

When I say THE Warriors Theory, I mean THE Warriors theory!

Firestar never should have come to the forest. Why? Look at the sequel of events.

If Firestar never came, Bluestar would have been killed by Tigerclaw sooner. Why is that good? It would have prevented many more deaths. Whitestorm. Brindleface. Swiftpaw. Who knows, it might caused even more. But I know that Bluestar was not meant to live this long. She went into madness because of the discovery of Tigerclaw being a traitor.

Second, Cinderpelt's crippling. If Bluestar has died earlier, Cinderpelt never would have been crippled, and her true destiny would have been fulfilled. Now, she had to be reborn so she could have a second chance. I have an idea of what this might be, and I will say so later.

For all we know, Tigerstar would still be alive. NOT TRUE. He was much older than Firestar, one of the oldest Warriors, and probably would have lost all nine of his lives by the time Midnight came into play. But then, Midnight would also be altered. No Leafpaw to be captured and saved. That means one less cat for Graystripe to save, and more time to save Brightheart, who he took the longest on. In other words, he wouldn't have been captured. Also, no Squirrelpaw. No nuisance to hold the traveling cats back.

Then, no Firestar, of course. Tigerstar wouldn't keep re-appearing to attempt to take his revenge on Firestar.

One more problem within the series. The Three. Hollyleaf, Jayfeather, and Lionblaze. They could have caused more destruction then what would have happened if they were never there. Or, you never know. They might save everybody from destruction.

Now that I have that out of the way...

~*~The Cinderpaw Theory~*~

Cinderpaw is meant to be Thunderclan's next leader. She was supposed to after Bluestar, or should I say Tigerstar, but she got crippled instead. So, she will succeed Firestar. Why am I so sure? Vicky even said herself the successor of Firestar will be somebody we don't expect. Well, it makes sense, doesn't it? Cinderstar! XD
~*~

Sorry about the clutter of this topic. I'll clean it up when I can.

[lostpaw]

I would LOVE if Firestar never came to the forest!

That's a good theory ^^

[Poison de Pointe du Lac]

Awesome!

Firestar should have NEVER come to the forest. I doubt it was any of the stuff from StarClan about destiny and an urge to go into the forest. I bet the "urge" was just some leftover adrenaline or something. XD

You forgot something, Wolf:
If Firestar had never come to the forest, the Clan would be less slack on letting in outsiders and kittypets.
Seriously, it all started with Firestar. And it only became worst once he became leader. God, how I wish Scourge had killed him.

[Wolfeth]

Good point XP

But each clan brings a cat in at SOME point. ShadowClan and RiverClan did, I know, but Firestar went overboard! I mean, KITTYPETS?! Geez, I support warrior blood! XP

[Poison de Pointe du Lac]

Yeah, they have to do that so that they don't start interbreeding (wait, do they even know what that is?) but usually it's a coolio rogue that knows how to fight.

Lolz.

[Wolfeth]

I think they already have. Half the clan is Dust x Fern kits, the other half is outsiders and kittypets... x-x

[Poison de Pointe du Lac]

I know! I'm so sick of Ferncloud having kits. Like some sort of kit machine.

[Wolfeth]

I think they take too much pleasure in having kits... o-o'

[Poison de Pointe du Lac]

o-o;;

Wolf... that sounded... strange.

XD

But yeah. The only time I've seen her out of camp was in Sunset where Squirrelflight was like, "Oh, Brambleclaw, you silly little goose, you assigned Ferncloud to much to patrol."
(Or something like that. XD)

But it's not like it's ever described her hunting. Maybe that's good, because I bet Dustpelt would have to hold her paw or something. ¬_¬

Anyway, back to the original subject, I'm glad you made this. I think the Clan life would have flowed more naturally without changing things and bringing in a kittypet.

And about the Bluestar getting killed by Tigerstar, I think you're right. But basically, after Tigerstar betrayed her, it was like she died. She became a paranoid freak that almost killed her Clan. (The WindClan thing.)

[lostpaw]

Exactly! Warrior blood! There's no point in having the Clans at all, at even having boundaries, if the bloodline is all mixed up and/or diluted by kittypets!

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